Pokémon Twilight

06.38: Going through the motions

Augh, sorry this one took so long. I had a lot of trouble trying to get this page to work the way I wanted it to. It's still not quite right, but close, anyway. Feel free to critique—that's what this comic's for, anyway, to improve my skills of an artist.

PT doesn't really take place in any specific pokémon canon, but I like to stick in the occasional little reference to the source. If you know what I'm talking about, virtual cookie for you. :)

User Comments

I Spy . . .

Ashy-boy! Or is that supposed to be Red and Yellow? Oh well. They're almost the same thing. Only Red is a whole lot better than Ash.

Anyways, nicely done page! It's all like deep and junk. Only art critique that jumps out at me is in the first panel, her elbow looks swollen. Or maybe just fat. And maybe that's just me. Shoulder looks weird to me too but that might just be because I draw all my own characters sloutching.

/rambling before I go too far.

Other than that, I don't really have much, sorry.

lol Ash. xD

@Vye: Yeah, it's Red and Yellow. I'm a really big (read: obsessive) Adventures/Special fan, haha.

Thanks for the note on the elbow—my anatomy gets kind of whack sometimes. I'll have to watch that.

I see someone making a cameo...

I see Ash's making a cameo in comics...... XDDDDD

OMG. Pikachu.

GAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!

So...... cute.... *twitch*

Must....resist.....urge.... to....... GLOMPPPPP!!!!!!! *tackleglomps Ash and Pikachu*
*gets Thunderbolted*
*runs away* OWW!!! THAT HURTT!!!

...Sorry, I didn't get any sleep last night so now I have to drink tons of Sprite to stay up. O3O

Please forgive me. Dx